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Remember to add things into the mirror. Your scene isn't set in a void

TheDikTatorTot responds:

Hey! Thanks for the review :)

I completely agree, however for this piece it was intentional as the rest of the piece has alot of detail and i wanted him to stand out in the mirror! If this was a more realistic piece however I would have definitely put detail in the mirror.

Really good but the way the golden buttons shine suggest that Star Platinum's hand is moving in two opposite directions. I recommend shortening the yellow lines on the top of their hand

What is this supposed to reference?

Are you going to do this on a transparent background

Great choreography! But try to better your art style. Mainly the face.

laika687 responds:

As I stated in my profile, I am no artist. This is a piece that I commissioned from jeffanime.

Your art style needs more work, and you should never use the default font in a comic (unless it's on a device in a scene)

AdventVoice responds:

Thanks for the input. I am glad you liked the story. Stay tuned next time for more of our show.

What am I supposed to say? It looks goofy (in a good way)

So... You saw the original Nintendo Bowsette?

HOwLiNG-MAdFoxHatter responds:

I saw it after completing this, and I want to draw something with that original concept so bad but bogged down by too many projects xD

I just need to see a few more posts before I can recommend you.

Keep working on those shadows

Art every month.
Games whenever.
Animations even less frequently.
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