UnculturedMutt's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fat Gum the Shield or Spear]

Try to use the same shading style for the spear attack. Also, shade with naturally darker colours instead of just gray or black

Fighter1Gamer responds:

Ok thanks for the tips.

[Manga Drawing]

I have a few tips: First of all, I'm believing that you're a child, so invest in plain/clear paper. It doesn't have to be much, just printer paper is good enough. Second of all, make the panel borders clearer by making them thicker or adding a bit of space between them. Last of all, add a line between the chin/lower jaw and the neck.

Lolireaper responds:

Thanks but it’s an old drawing so I haven’t finished it for over 4 years and I’m over 19-20 years of age

[Tali's Big Bust]

This is okay, but you could shade it to make some parts clearer. I reccomend you do cel shading

[Dmitry]

Just because it's not the main thing doesn't mean you shouldn't shade it. Remember that the bin lid and the bin are two different entities, so shade the top of the bin to show that it's being covered. Do the same for the right arm behind the torso and the torso behind the left arm

Wolfman-Al responds:

Thank you. It was actually more of a character study, so I did a quick and dirty with the shading. Somehow I overlooked the trashcan.

[doble cara]

Try not to use flat shading. Try to shade the character in a 3D sense, adding more shading to crevices and less to bumps.

[Lourdes]

I love the different styles of shading

MatthewLopz responds:

thank you!
i've been trying to add more shading to my pieces without straight up just cell shading everything, mix of a bunch of stuff including screentones 👍

[Laugh At You]

Nice, but I'd probably probably rearrange the panels. The laughter panel would be second, but without the dad(?). Then, I'd add the laughter panel with the dad at the end. It would be four panels instead of three, but I think it could make the twist better

[Sixfanart Challenge 1]

Please add names?

EpithetSoup responds:

All fixed! Sorry about that.

[Another Six Fanart]

Could probably need a bit more shading

[Goku the Monkey]

Nice use of colours to represent the gi. Main problem is the gloves. Maybe make the gloves blue but with white like the gloves Vegeta uses.

Rlectro responds:

Thanks for the tip, I was having trouble thinking of a good color for the gloves so i just defaulted to the gray