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UnculturedMutt

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There's not enough shading on the building. It also doesn't really stand out when the background is the same colour

WhiteWatermelon responds:

Yes, but that's fine with me, I only do pixel art for fun, I don't care so much about the details

I like the rough linework.

There's no punchline here, though the art is nice.

For Bucky Hyena, you still should add shading to his fur. I'm guessing you used pure black, so next time, you should probably do a lighter shade or just a dark colour to allow shading.

I think the main problem is in the hair. If the fire is in front of the hair, then you should remove the lines in that section. Otherwise, the shading of the hair seems more like a group of lines.

Dio's eyes aren't facing Tailsko, and there's no shadows separating different parts. This is especially bad, since they are both wearing the same colour clothes.

The dialogue interlaps a lot. Try colour-coding it for each character

For the sans emoji, you should colour his head like you colour teeth, as they are both made of bone

I like how much it is styled

PopTevin responds:

Thank you^^

Can you add a picture of the colour palette?

BoJustBo responds:

I can do better than that. Here is the Lospec page for it that has all the info about it as well as a picture.
https://lospec.com/palette-list/night-11

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