UnculturedMutt's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Eddsworld]

I feel like you shouldn't use just grey for the shadows.

[Taekwondo Fight]

First of all, I think you should probably darken/blur the people in the background to make it easier to see the characters that you want to focus on.

Secondly, try to remove the vertical lines before you begin to draw.

pedropaulojansen responds:

Yes, I forgot about this detail of people, I made this drawing in 2017, but thanks for the tip. Those vertical lines are from the notebook, there was no way to remove.

[MY Time in the Universe - Cover 1]

You said he's a "genetically engineered soldier", but he also "breaks free of his programming". Does that mean he's a robot or a human with genetic modifications?

Kiyan1159 responds:

This will be explained in the story, albeit most of the details are pretty far in as Kiyan only knows he was genetically engineered to fight a specific threat. In short, his DNA was extracted and modified very heavily to the point that he almost doesn't appear human on DNA tests.

EDIT: Another thing to mention, in his modifications they made him more obedient. However something on Earth changes that.

[TDE (Spoiler From Who's TDE)]

I think that you shouldn't have the light source directly above the character. Also, to achieve the type of eyes your trying to draw, make the vertical lines thicker or add more of them

ElEnzoneitorWTF responds:

Thank you so much for da review brother.

[Inktober52 2020 - Week 8: Spider]

Oh, so you're doing mainly ink then colour pencils? Cool.

evanharrey responds:

Thank you n.n7 using just one color for drawing.

[Gorbo the Lorbo (Cursed Gift Art)]

I feel like the blush should be a pink circle instead of lines a pixel wide

TrueKingFlash responds:

Shoot, you're right!

[LuLe - Naril]

I think that the position you drew the arms makes them look limp

[Kebab]

I think that you should make your watermark more transparent to not drag attention away.

piratechipgames responds:

That's not a bad idea, think I'll do that on future art. Thanks!

[OK:KO Dendy pixelart]

Try uploading with a higher pixel area for a higher quality.

Jpuc responds:

yeah i messed this one up because i have no idea what im doing

[El fantasma calabaza]

I'm surprised that you went a lineless route for your pixel art. Keep up the good work.