UnculturedMutt's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[SUPER MARIO!! (#Mar10)]

I feel like there's something wrong with the angling of Mario's head

GlitchyPSI responds:

Could be, can you elaborate?

[Alien tourist and their dog]

That looks good, but there's nothing that makes them look like tourists. Unfortunately, they're so small in the picture that you can't add any detail. You could add the tourism aspect with vandalism on the rock they're on, overcrowding or flashing lights.

ieJoMaFLo responds:

I like the vandalism idea. But to be honest this was mainly just me having some fun with a background and then throwing in some figures to give it some scale, so the space tourist thing was a total last minute idea that I just ran with.

[Chillin' in the Tub]

Really good, but you can easily see that some parts are edited in with the line boldness and how blurry the lines are. My only recommendation is that you should make the lines more crisp

PrinceOfGoblinS responds:

Thank you, I'm actually always looking for ways to improve so it means a lot to me.

[Still Gotta get Up In The Mornin]

Remember to add things into the mirror. Your scene isn't set in a void

TheDikTatorTot responds:

Hey! Thanks for the review :)

I completely agree, however for this piece it was intentional as the rest of the piece has alot of detail and i wanted him to stand out in the mirror! If this was a more realistic piece however I would have definitely put detail in the mirror.

[HSDK: Shinpaku vs Yomi 3 (JEFFANIME)]

Great choreography! But try to better your art style. Mainly the face.

laika687 responds:

As I stated in my profile, I am no artist. This is a piece that I commissioned from jeffanime.

[Star]

Your art style needs more work, and you should never use the default font in a comic (unless it's on a device in a scene)

AdventVoice responds:

Thanks for the input. I am glad you liked the story. Stay tuned next time for more of our show.

[Firey Groom]

So... You saw the original Nintendo Bowsette?

HOwLiNG-MAdFoxHatter responds:

I saw it after completing this, and I want to draw something with that original concept so bad but bogged down by too many projects xD

[EW fancomic - Family]

What's the joke

Hedieh responds:

I just though maybe Tom's parents weren't a bowling ball and a pineapple, just trying to show the idea that it was only his own imagination. I don't think there's any comedy here lol.

[Link deku version (Colored)]

Nice. Just make it more divided in colour.

PungentGallery responds:

yea I wish I could but these markers suck but at least they work

[Official Santitoon Image]

Hmmmmmm....... Your art style.... Eddsworld?

Santitoon responds:

yes,i know it looks like edd's style XD