UnculturedMutt's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sonic and Tails]

Please explain why their expressions are like that.

tomy6 responds:

They're acting smug cus they just did something i guess

[Alexander Anderson - Hellsing Ultimate]

I feel like you should warp the text to fit the slanted surface of the blade.

MurasakiNoodle responds:

This was my first usage of trying to implement text with form, to be honest I had trouble trying to define the slanted surface that I wanted. I'll try my best to figure ot how I can do this better in future. Thank you for you input and critique.

[Stripes]

It looks like you're using grey for shading. Try using appropriate(in this case, skin) colours for shading. Also, what your using for shading makes the characters look to shiny and chrome.

Densetsu1000 responds:

Thank you very much for the advice.

Ultimately, I'd prefer to try and continue using grey tones for my initial shading on the white canvas, prior to applying the colours, as I'm aiming to try and create my mages in a way where they can appear "completed" as both monochromatic or coloured images.

However, in taking your advice, I'll try and better blend the grey tones into the colours that I do use in the future, so that they don't appear as jarring as they currently do on my coloured images.

[test]

Fill the picture with white next time

Clawscobra responds:

alright thanks for the feed back i was just seeing what size my canvas nedded to be for the neo geo jam and slapped that on

[New Painted Plummet Jaiden Sprite]

Please explain her choice of clothing

RafaTheBeat responds:

It follows her reference pic design closely. https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/443586341884919808/729136678215876698/Painted_Plummet_Jaiden_Animations.png

[bullies]

Are they the ones from the Simpsons?

drallimylime responds:

you know it, dude! :)

[Meet Benji]

You haven't really explained his character. You just wrote down some of his character traits.

Jasa123 responds:

Yeah I'm planning a comic so I don't want to give away story beats

[Stolas from Helluva Boss (Requested by I've seen too much)]

Would be better if colours were more smooth. You should either buy better colouring pencils or watch blending tutorials.

LupertEverett responds:

Fair point. This was my first time trying to do blending. I'll consider both of the options!

Thanks for leaving a comment! :D

[purple circuits purple circuits]

What franchise is this from? Or is this an original idea?

Jimmuh responds:

Whoops I forgot to put it in the post! It's Tron and Beck from the 2012 cartoon Tron: Uprising. Really badass with tons of cool fights and beautiful art direction. I highly reccommend it.

[Greg Bruise]

I feel like you could explain the concept and character in a better way, but the art is still good

Trashmourt responds:

Noted, i'll try my best. ( i'm not a naitive speaker) thanks for advice, and reading it too!