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That looks nice, but you didn't show any of the mechanics, or even the movement

VoidDdraig responds:

Indeed Was going to make a gameplay video directly but programer is really bussy with another project so this was just manually animated (right now i'm working on showing it, so this video will be updated adding the scenes of the basic combos, wall climbing, etc)

The AI generated elephant in the room aside, I don't think you should overrely on rigging your drawings in order to animate them.

It looks cheap to rely on one pose for a character's action, when it may be better to use multiple unique drawings in different positions for one action

Dilfroo responds:

I agree it looks cheap. I guess I didn't care enough, but now that you point it out, I can think about weather it is worth the time saved. Thanks for the critic

Maybe you should've added the audio in post?

bjoch13 responds:

I Did, because i recently uploaded audio on my dreams ps5, and it's private.

Good, but I feel like there's some level of desync

MTanimates responds:

My method of sync is weird, I usually have the characters speak before you hear them to match speed of light vs speed of sound. Also I do it because I only have 24 frames per second to work with and with cartoons like these characters talk fast, so I have them talk early to fight all the words, and it doesn’t always work.

It's perfect. You just need to learn perspective on the backgrounds

SquishDotFLA responds:

Thanks! And I definitely have to practice that. I’ve always been kinda bad at perspective

It's cool that you made a gif of Hoss rating this 5 stars, but the BGM is too quiet, there's not enough sound effects and the animation is way too slow, especially when it was intended to be 20 seconds at most.

It also lacks colour or detail, which isn't bad in itself, but makes the already long and quiet video uninteresting to look at.

Maxfilm responds:

You're right music volume is really low.
I didn't realized that so thanks for reminding me :)
It hapened because my headphones are broken,I was doing this at night and i was trying to not wake up my family.
I hope that now it's beter with louder music.

"That Ret animator again, of all places..."

Joe-nutty responds:

Son of a b word.

It was mainly one shot without much movement.

ShadyTheOne responds:

It's sort of just a test animatic. I'm dipping my feet into the world of animation, so I wasn't aiming for anything too crazy. Just a little video to hopefully make people laugh :)

The mixing is off, so I couldn't hear much of the audio

CraigCommander responds:

i apologize, getting some of the audio clips was difficult without them having the background music where they originated from.

It's good, but I feel that the poses are borrowed too much from Crae's animation

HOTMINUTEStudios responds:

Yea I had an idea for this animation for awhile but seeing crae's made me really wanna do it. i have a problem where if I see something even if I do my best to be different I will still take parts from it so its fair. thanks for watching and the critique though! I will do my best to make my animations unique!

Art every month.
Games whenever.
Animations even less frequently.
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